Thursday, November 15, 2012

Writer's Block: Sports

What's your favorite sport?  Tell me about a dramatic game with an active voice.  Yardage, velocity, power, precision and backspin are all popular and often necessary subjects in sports.  While describing running yards or serve speed or slugging percentage, describe in active voice what you saw--or what you see in your imaginary game. 

"Defensive tackle Page flopped on a Colts' cut block, and then used the center to spring into the backfield, wrapping the quarterback for a loss of 8 yards."

or

"Defensive tackle Page got an 8-yard sack."

While journalism preaches efficiency and lean writing, I'm saying, 'have fun!'  Let the reader have some fun, too.  Get into the real details and description of the action. 

I love sports and reading about them, so feel free to leave something you've written about an exciting game--real or imaginary!

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